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Transform the story you've been carrying in your heart into a standout novel you and your readers absolutely love. Alice offers radically collaborative revision mentorship for fiction writers pursuing creative excellence. A Story Grid certified developmental editor and Author Accelerator certified book coach, she’s an expert at helping writers craft the most powerful version of their stories by making every scene unputdownable.

What da Vinci, Michelangelo, and you have in common

Hi Reader, Last week, my editor friend Kim and I took an impromptu trip to Italy. (Because when a friend of a friend offers you free round-trip tickets in exchange for escorting kittens from Venice to the US, you say absolutely, yes please.) We spent a day in Milan (not my favorite) and a couple days each in Florence and Cinque Terre (loved them both and hated to leave). Of course, we visited all the classic sites: the Duomo (in both Milan and Florence); Michelangelo’s David; the Uffizi...

What directors and editors have in common

Hi Reader, Have you ever felt profoundly seen by something someone else has written? It’s an incredible feeling. The sense that you’re not alone. Someone else thinks and feels and sees and understands the same things you do. Someone found words for an experience you’ve struggled to express. And because they shared those words with you, you can pass them on to other people so others can see a little glimpse of you, too. I’m going to go out on a limb and guess . . . yes. At some point, in...

The 2 problems keeping you stuck in endless revision

Hi Reader, We’ve all heard of the shitty first draft. Personally, I don’t love the term; I find it a little too judgmental and emotionally charged. But it gets the point across: Your first draft’s job isn’t to be perfect. It’s not going to go on bookstore shelves. It’s not the version your readers will read. Its only job is to exist. Make it to “The End,” and you’ve succeeded. No matter how messy. No matter the plot holes. The flat characters. The world building inconsistencies. So when you...

how to write when the big sads hit

Hi Reader, My best friend is moving away, and I’m sad. I’ve spent the last week at her house. Every morning, I get our favorite bagels from the bagel shop down the road. Every night, her four-year-old daughter and I spread my sheets on the couch and tuck our dolls into bed. (Right now, as I write this, said four-year-old is sitting next to me, munching on a bagel and spreading crumbs all over my couch-bed.) Around the third time I extended my visit rather than driving home, I finally...

The most painful part of the revision process

Hi Reader, I talk with a lot of writers in the revision process. I typically meet with writers when . . . You have an idea that you are passionate about, a vision that you are determined to turn into a novel you and your readers will love. You can feel the energy of it, an emotional experience you want to create for your readers. There’s a story playing in your imagination, and you want to transfer it, in all its dazzling glory, to others’ imaginations, too. You’ve written a draft of that...

Why I'm choosing to swizzle

Hi Reader, I am in swizzle purgatory. In the last three months, I’ve spent more than thirty hours on the ice learning to skate. I joined an adult Learn to Skate class, and alongside eight other students, I’ve been learning the basics of moving on the ice. One of the first moves we learned is the swizzle. You push your feet apart, glide forward, and then pull your legs back together again. Like this: It feels like I have been swizzling nonstop for thirty hours. And I am torn. I want to master...

Fight me.

Hi Reader, I am eight drafts into something new. When I started the first draft two months ago, I was pumped. I had a vision. I had direction. I had a clear map of what I was writing. . . . actually, depending on how you count “drafts,” I actually created the first draft three or four months ago, in a different format. And by that math, I’m actually on draft . . . fifteen? Eighteen? I’m losing count. Here’s how the doc looks so far: And as you can probably imagine (and guess from my titling...

Write like you’ve already won

Hi Reader, I continue to be obsessed with Olympic figure skating. I’ve been listening to the U.S. Figure Skating podcast to hear how the skaters were thinking about their experiences and expectations in the leadup to the Olympics. I’ve looked up interviews to hear how Ilia Malinin is talking about his medal and his falls, now that he has a week and a half of distance from both. I’m devouring articles about Alysa Liu, ravenous to understand how she could skate with such peace and...

Are you chasing the wrong (writing) podium?

Hi Reader, I am obsessed with Cha Jun-Hwan’s figure skating routine. I watched it last week in the Olympic men’s short program competition. I never finished watching that competition—I was busy rewinding Jun-Hwan’s routine to watch him over and over again. I filmed my TV screen on my phone and watched it again while I sat in the courthouse on jury duty. I gushed about it to friends and family. I’ve been listening to the song he skated to on loop for a week. Jun-Hwan didn’t win a medal. He...

How will you know when your novel is done?

Hi Reader, How will you know when you’re done? Will it be when you LOVE your book? When you stop cringing as you read it? When you can’t think of a single change left to make? When beta readers rave about it? When they tell you the romantic scenes made them swoon and the funny scenes made them laugh, the scary scenes gave them nightmares and the sad scenes made them cry? When a reader tells you your book impacted them profoundly? That it changed the way they think about something that...

6 Reasons to LOVE editing (from people who actually do love it)

Hi Reader, So you’re revising yet another draft. You’re hoping against hope that this draft will be your final draft. Which, coincidentally, is also what you hoped for the last draft, and the one before that. Editing is a slog you’re trudging through. You dream of the day when you can escape this drudgery and return to the free-flowing fun of writing the first draft of your next book. But what if editing isn’t an obstacle you have to grit your teeth and bear? What if it’s where the magic...

Transform the story you've been carrying in your heart into a standout novel you and your readers absolutely love. Alice offers radically collaborative revision mentorship for fiction writers pursuing creative excellence. A Story Grid certified developmental editor and Author Accelerator certified book coach, she’s an expert at helping writers craft the most powerful version of their stories by making every scene unputdownable.