Hi Reader,
Where the heck is the turning point?
If you’ve ever tried to spot the turning point in a story you love, you’ve probably asked some version of this question.
I always feel like I’m playing that old children’s video game: Where in the world is Carmen Sandiego?
(In my imagination, the turning point is captured in shadowy profile, wearing a red hat with a wide brim.) (this is also called, tell me you’re a 90’s baby without telling me you’re a 90’s baby.)
Anyway. When you’re analyzing someone else’s story, it feels like a hunt for something you just can’t spot.
When you’re analyzing your own story, it feels like second-guessing your pacing.
Did you put the turning point in the right spot? Is it happening too early? Too late? Will the reader get bored waiting for it to happen? Or have you rushed something critical?
If any of those questions sound familiar, you won’t want to miss today’s brand-new episode of Your Next Draft.
It’s all about where in the story the turning point is located—and yes, this question is complicated enough to require an entire episode to unpack.
You’ll hear:
- 2 guiding principles I use for the location of every turning point
- Where the turning point is located in a novel, novella, and scene—and why those can be different places
- What happens when you move the turning point earlier or later
- Whether the turning point and the midpoint are ever the same point
- And more!
Read or listen to Where the Turning Point Goes (And How to Know If Yours Is in the Right Place) »
You know what the turning point is—the moment that makes it clear the protagonist cannot achieve their goal in the way they wanted to.
You know what it does—it forces the protagonist into a crisis choice.
And now, you’ll know where to look for it—and where to put it in your own stories.
Read or listen now »
Happy editing,
Alice
P.S. Are you enjoying this series of episodes on the Six Elements of Story?
If so, you’ll definitely want to join me at the Escape the Plot Forest summit. I’m speaking this Saturday, October 18.
My talk is called: Beyond Formula: The Human-Driven Structure Behind Every Great Story. In it, I’ll be sharing why the Six Elements of Story are so powerful.
Plus, I’ll be previewing some story structure mistakes and solutions that haven’t even made it to the podcast yet! And I’ll be answering questions in the chat, so you can bring all your burning Six Elements questions.
The summit is free, and you can grab your ticket here.
I can’t wait to see you there!