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How to write the moment that changes everything


Hi Reader,

Can I be honest? I struggled with turning points for years.

I knew they were essential. They’re the moment when everything changes. The moment that forces the character to face a crisis choice. The moment that reveals what the story is really, at its heart, about.

And yet . . . I couldn’t see them.

I found so many things that weren’t the turning point. I found inciting incidents, and midpoints, and climaxes.

The turning point, though? It eluded me.

Until I learned a simple framework that finally, finally unlocked them for me.

That framework:

  • Reveals why the turning point matters so dang much within the story
  • Ties the turning point perfectly to the inciting incident, climax, and every other element of story
  • Is objective and straightforward, making it clear to measure (no more guessing at turning points based on gut feeling!)
  • Is wonderfully simple (it’s kind of incredible how simple it is, considering how tough turning points are to spot)

That framework marked my turning point in the way I edit turning points.

And I’m sharing that framework with you on today’s brand-new episode of Your Next Draft.

Read or listen to Turning Point: How to Find and Write the Moment That Changes Everything »

If you have ever struggled to figure out what the heck the turning point is in a story, well, you’re not alone.

I hope this framework gives you a breakthrough. It certainly did for me!

Read or listen now »

Happy editing,

Alice

Currently reading: Kingdom of Ash by Sarah J. Maas

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Alice Sudlow is a Story Grid certified developmental editor and Author Accelerator certified book coach for fiction writers who are already good and who want to become amazing. She’s an expert at helping them to craft the most powerful version of their stories by making every scene unputdownable.

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